A good story takes place during a critical juncture in our character’s lives, a particular crisis, or a change in their personality. Some books span decades, but most are concerned with a single incident, maybe a week, in that character’s life. But a fully realized character has had a life long before the events of your book, and sometimes those stories are interesting to explore.
When should an author explore these pre-stories? Some prequels to series only really make sense in the context of what will come later. When I first tried to get my wife into Babylon 5 I showed her “In The Beginning” a chronological prequel to the events of the main series. But, it became clear that someone watching this for the first time would still not get half of what was going on, or the significance of how certain characters meet.
But then there’s the prequel that actually becomes the beginning of a series.
I seem to devise books backwards, at least in my head. The eventual series I’d like to complete started at what I now consider book three, which technically might become book four. In order to explore the events of book three, I had to go back to what set them up, and what set them up and so on.
A specific example of this is the two stories “Dust” and “Gray”, scenes from a character in my work in progress DM, but taking place long before the events of the actual book. The character introduced in these stories is more mysterious in DM, and we don’t know her full origin story, yet in writing these two short stories I am tempted to spill the beans and write the whole thing.
Can a character still be a mystery in a future book, even if we know how she originated?
I guess the answer is that it depends on the author and their ability, and in the other character’s knowledge. The character might be well known to the reader, but unknown to the other characters.
I guess what this proves if nothing else, is that chronological order is not always the logical order for presenting art. That’s why I’ve always found it funny when people rearrange books in an author’s series and read them in a completely different order than they were written, to get the chronology right, but not the character development.
But then again it might work, and authors, especially indie authors, are probably slaves more to what they want to write than how it should always be released.
All this might be a tangential way of saying that I’m considering a novella soon which may or may not come out before DM. If nothing else the exercise may help my revisions and help me to get a better understanding of the character.
This is probably what comes of writing by the seat of my pants and not outlining.
*sigh*
What about you? Have you ever thought of a prequel after your main story has gotten going?
I’ve TOTALLY thought of prequels! I have a story set in a far away island, and the main story takes place after two wars that shaped the whole plot. I honestly think that for the purpose of the story, sometimes going backwards is best. Tho’ it could be argued it’s often done for money-making, it’s a good idea. It’s the sequels you gotta watch out for…
P.S. I’d love to read this novella of yours, too! Is there anywhere I can find some of it???
Last Thursday’s story was a brief scene contained within what would probably be the novella, and it links to a story from a while back that also relates. I’m not sure (as with many of my projects) when this would actually come out, but if more details come to fruition I’ll let you know. Thanks Kelsey 🙂
I’m always so impressed by those who have either written a series. or have the ideas too. As a non-fiction writer, I have even thought about writing a series, a sort of Past, Present, Future memoir series. Thanks for a good read, though provoking as usual. 🙂
That’s an interesting idea for a memoir series (and one that might actually get me to read a memoir 🙂 ). Glad you liked the post!
Characters with origins are also mysterious if the origins can only be given partial credit for leading to the character’s behavior. Take, for example, Strider from Lord of the Rings: the reader learns early on that he’s a member of a long-lived race and a Ranger of the North. But despite knowing this,and learning shortly thereafter of his rightful place on the throne of Gondor, he maintains a close-lipped, guarded presence. It isn’t until later, during various battles and tests in books 2 and 3 of the trilogy, that we come to understand him fully, as a man who is just as reluctant to accept his inheritance as he is determined to claim the throne of Gondor, and a man who is a brave leader precisely because he knows enough about the enemy to fear them.
In short, these are traits that are uniquely his own, and reflect choices that he made. If we aren’t made aware of those choices early on, no amount of knowledge of a character’s origins is going to throw them fully into light.
That is a really good point. In the case of my character, we’re seeing her at a much earlier point in her life than when she comes to the stage in the novel. There are a lot of years in between that have molded and changed her from the woman we knew, and so even if we were to be told the basics, there would still be so much for us to learn. Great example from LOTR 🙂